So wonderful science girl, NanU is still at the helm of the bus. A marathon double, never been done before (ithink) So well done to her and a mighty big thanklo!
New drivers are urgently required apply in writing to the comments box. Nobody has yet been refused so the chances of getting the gig are pretty high!
Previous drivers may apply, all are welcome.The people's poetry bus is an equal opportunities employer.
We offer no money but excellent working conditions with huge job satisfaction, you could be the instigator, the twisted fire starter of new poetry! Oh, the power, think of it! Driving a packed out talent laden creative catalyst around da woild! You can start this very week with a prompt in the next few days for poems on Monday, first come first served!
You will be part of a worldwide, world famous, phenomenon and it will look really good on your CV, as well as your gravestone. Make things happen, drive the bus before you die. Or after if you can!
I don't think I quite fulfilled the brief of NanU's second prompt, to build a poem up over time and across different moods, but then anything goes on the bus so long as you write. But it did make me rewrite, which is something I rarely do, and that's the whole point, to create something that might not exist only for the bus. I'll probably rewrite it some more and see what I end up with.
Roses by the river
Blood and Petals
Only words
Are they enough
Holding on
Floating
Face down
Drowning
In self importance
Speaking mirrors syllables
By any other name
metaphors
perpendicular
To cause
the effect
your pocket demons
safe on the banks
Grab your towel
Grab your comb
Run for your life
The skies full of
Your alien spacecraft, closer
In the rear view mirror
City beams burn,
Cut, pull yourself apart
Kill yourself for one more poem
Kill yourself just to make it stop
This war of the words
This plague this pestilence
This poison
This butterfly knife
This poetry
Reigning down
Will kill us all.
6 comments:
oooh, now that's one for Volume 2. Such power, the pocket demons! word verification: bowelpit. That should be in there too.
First, I can't drive till term's over, feel a bit of a heel but I don't even have a candle left to burn at the moment.
Second, phew what a scorcher! Yes, incredible last three lines but I also really loved the succession of these three:
'Grab your towel
Grab your comb
Run for your life'
That's a powerful one Peadar. The muse seems to have left me at present but it is good to see what others are up to. Hope you'll soon feel better. Take care, keep warm and don't breathe on your dear Mrs.Feck!!
My sentiments exactly. Do wish I could get back into writing poetry again - still suffering from shock I think - but keep trying.
Dangerous!!!
Love the wordplay cascading throughout this one, TFE!
Hope you're feeling better.
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