Not just for auld lang syne
Don’t talk,
whatever you say-
say nothing.
The snakebitten poison of past,
a bone-eating cancer.
That past is still what it used to be,
the past made us,but
it does not rule us.
Past tense,
future bright.
Forget love, forget hate, forget past,
that’s another country
We must be go-aheads
No longer go-betweens
for loss and disruption
the veins of communication
the shot-up messenger
bearing false comforting plenitude.
We can sing a new way,
sing tomorrow’s song, today,
your hand in my hand,
for the future,
for this New Year,
for hope in your mind
and in mine,
for the promise of this newborn year,
no longer just singing by rote
for the sake of auld lang syne.
11 comments:
TFE and hope for the future - this is a banner day! And a really great poem!
'Go-aheads,' yes! Also, I love the lines, "past tense/ future bright." Brilliant as usual, oh Fearless Leader!
Happy New Year!
Oh, and I love the new symmetrical photography!
One of my all time favorites!!!
Happy New Year.
ohh!argg!
I'll raise a cup of kindness for those sentiments. Go boldly forth...
great, unsentimental and all the better for it.
What a piece of work is man! Impressive, inspiring and I picked on the same bit as the driver herself,
Past tense,
future bright.
I'll try...
The past made us but doesn't rule us! There should be tee shirts with this on!
I like that poem.
I like the way the first three lines set up the speaker's ambivalence about the new year/future -Don't talk, whatever you say- say nothing - and the way his attitude shifts through the poem. He begins, against his own advice, by dwelling on the past. Snake bitten- bone eating plays nicely on the ear. By the end he has moved himself and us into the future and the new beginning promised in "newborn," which borrows resonance from the Christmas story, without ever mentioning it. Nicely done.
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