tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post692679146657740138..comments2023-09-24T13:42:26.769+01:00Comments on Yes it's TOTALFECKINEEJIT: EEjits short day of the Poetry Bus soul.Totalfeckineejithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-43224260113430473922011-01-19T11:23:16.850+00:002011-01-19T11:23:16.850+00:00And my ticket is
HERE amongst other nonsensical t...And my ticket is <br /><a href="http://havantaclue.blogspot.com/2011/01/spoilt-for-choice.html" rel="nofollow"><b>HERE</b></a> amongst other nonsensical tomfoolery...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-84158294768971338482011-01-18T14:36:52.528+00:002011-01-18T14:36:52.528+00:00Finally finished! I hope there's a seat left ...Finally finished! I hope there's a seat left on the bus for me!<br /><br /><a href="http://thisisbubbasplace.blogspot.com/2011/01/curse-you-sylvia-plath.html" rel="nofollow">Curse You, Sylvia Plath</a>Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-58844698015715258552011-01-18T12:07:12.197+00:002011-01-18T12:07:12.197+00:00I'm late, but I'm here:
http://titusthedo...I'm late, but I'm here:<br /><br />http://titusthedog.blogspot.com/2011/01/bus-tfes-breathing-bus.html<br /><br />Bubba! What a brilliant name. I thought you only got it in films!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-84381667748984542202011-01-18T11:38:56.962+00:002011-01-18T11:38:56.962+00:00I've read this several times - can't keep ...I've read this several times - can't keep away, you see - and liked it more each time. I think it's cast some sort of spell.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-44368450260238445912011-01-18T07:19:52.035+00:002011-01-18T07:19:52.035+00:00This is some way to celebrate your birthday, TFE. ...This is some way to celebrate your birthday, TFE. I'm sure there's a lot of breath left in you yet.<br />I love the last few lines especially, but those "mind graves" are haunting, indeed.<br /><br />I can't believe, I posted mine yesterday and completely forgot to let you know! It's now 2:15 a.m. and I am awake because something was niggling; so here I am:<br /><br />http://hyggedigter.blogspot.com/2011/01/poetry-bus-take-deep-breath_17.html<br /><br />KatoKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-40678204999711415792011-01-18T02:12:17.634+00:002011-01-18T02:12:17.634+00:00I'll have it done tomorrow!I'll have it done tomorrow!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-35596652722226911392011-01-17T23:51:34.166+00:002011-01-17T23:51:34.166+00:00Take your time time Bubba, this bus goes but it ne...Take your time time Bubba, this bus goes but it never leaves!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-28011774397568891192011-01-17T22:28:25.162+00:002011-01-17T22:28:25.162+00:00What's the deadline?
I've got one ALMOST ...What's the deadline?<br /><br />I've got one ALMOST ready!<br />(It's beating me up pretty good!)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-79457565506191085292011-01-17T20:15:55.914+00:002011-01-17T20:15:55.914+00:00Hi TFE, can you put my link on the list pretty ple...Hi TFE, can you put my link on the list pretty please?<br />I like how you're linking hte breathing with the regular heartbeat. Rhythm is working wellEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-33891062299655088132011-01-17T20:13:03.345+00:002011-01-17T20:13:03.345+00:00I finally just read your poem, Peadar and find it ...I finally just read your poem, Peadar and find it fine, fine! This may be my favorite of yours.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-33394855017471874732011-01-17T18:38:33.929+00:002011-01-17T18:38:33.929+00:00Yeah I'm on - first out of the garage this me...Yeah I'm on - first out of the garage this merry morn - but methinks I gave my ticket to the wrong clippy! Now I'm going to relax.<br /><br />Fine poem from that EEJIT fellow-me-lad, I thought! Tell him so if you see him.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-64829841939103041142011-01-17T17:53:32.286+00:002011-01-17T17:53:32.286+00:00Loved the last two lines. Great one TFE.Loved the last two lines. Great one TFE.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-3941189015284798922011-01-17T17:21:52.430+00:002011-01-17T17:21:52.430+00:00Oh, I likes your poem, I likes it!
Alas I have be...Oh, I likes your poem, I likes it!<br /><br />Alas I have been dallying about all weekend and have nary a poem to offer today.<br />But!<br />There are the prompts for the next two weeks: http://sciencegirltraveler.blogspot.com/2011/01/poetry-bus-for-january.htmlNanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-52684642627366582552011-01-17T16:50:45.324+00:002011-01-17T16:50:45.324+00:00I'm up if interested! Not sure how to link yet...I'm up if interested! Not sure how to link yet!<br />Great poem , loved it, and agree with Mairi.Kiplinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14420207142240102298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-79195730717361776292011-01-17T11:23:40.442+00:002011-01-17T11:23:40.442+00:00Good touches in your poem - the scarred, the mind ...Good touches in your poem - the scarred, the mind graves, the yeses (plural of yes?). More positive than you sometimes write... good!<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-67145595262522153342011-01-17T10:02:32.405+00:002011-01-17T10:02:32.405+00:00I'm on board, and a right depressing one it is...I'm on board, and a right depressing one it is too. Remind me never to listen to the silence late at night again! Apologies in advance. Happy Birthday by the way.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-21874076883646112572011-01-17T06:27:44.296+00:002011-01-17T06:27:44.296+00:00A glorious ending there, TFE, for your Dog day Sun...A glorious ending there, TFE, for your Dog day Sunday. You made me ache, yep, until you hit that last hurrah!<br />I've been absent w/o leave for two weeks. Feels good to be aboard.<br /><a href="http://chrisalba-enchantedoak.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">My Bus ticket is here</a>Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-23793680272553691952011-01-17T03:46:03.099+00:002011-01-17T03:46:03.099+00:00Second stop for me, and so far two for love,optimi...Second stop for me, and so far two for love,optimism and internal rhyme. 1 more and I'll have to declare an epidemic. I like the idea of extra time, injury time. You know how often they score in the last minute.Mairihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09329522168121977658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-20576128329488932732011-01-16T22:20:53.901+00:002011-01-16T22:20:53.901+00:00I'm on board hereI'm on board <a href="http://emergingwriter.blogspot.com/2011/01/breathing-on-poetry-bus.html" rel="nofollow">here</a>Emerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-68577432182635489592011-01-16T20:51:00.430+00:002011-01-16T20:51:00.430+00:00Just posted my little offering.Just posted my little offering.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826501916623305535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-26247731489445908822011-01-16T17:03:06.345+00:002011-01-16T17:03:06.345+00:00Just made it on now, Toughie, phew!Just made it on now, Toughie, phew!Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-11159969125298392882011-01-16T14:45:41.287+00:002011-01-16T14:45:41.287+00:00I hear Birthday wishes are in order ... wishing yo...I hear Birthday wishes are in order ... wishing you the happiest ever. (you don't have to trim those eyebrows - I said so!) <br /><br />Poetry as oxygen ... yes.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-12715178371703703142011-01-16T13:54:29.995+00:002011-01-16T13:54:29.995+00:00Here I am! http://danabugseyeview.blogspot.com/201...Here I am! http://danabugseyeview.blogspot.com/2011/01/poetry-bus-stormy-weather.htmlThe Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.com