tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post4904211269590921941..comments2023-09-24T13:42:26.769+01:00Comments on Yes it's TOTALFECKINEEJIT: NanU sane science Part Two!Totalfeckineejithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-83716382238511586522010-10-18T22:14:57.260+01:002010-10-18T22:14:57.260+01:00I think the rhyming works well here and I always l...I think the rhyming works well here and I always like a bit of wordplayEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-76095661409333085872010-10-18T19:29:30.013+01:002010-10-18T19:29:30.013+01:00Some of us, Eej, fall in love and never hit the gr...Some of us, Eej, fall in love and never hit the ground.<br /><br />Incidentally, could you please sit in that chair on your header and do a King Canute, commanding the waves to go back or something. Each time I come to your site i want to see you in that chair!The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-32403504947795555252010-10-18T17:27:53.522+01:002010-10-18T17:27:53.522+01:00Aah love. It is never easy!
I am just visiting to...Aah love. It is never easy! <br />I am just visiting to say thank you for the beautiful comment. I didn't know if it was your words or a quote(being a bit of a poetry ignoramus) so googled it. Is it from The Charnel Rose? It is just so beautiful. I have printed it out for reading at my leisure later when not supposed to be working! <br />Your header picture looks like a good beach-and it has the big stuff to find!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15941415622199071141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-73687388338100617152010-10-18T17:08:19.071+01:002010-10-18T17:08:19.071+01:00Wonderful imagery in this.Wonderful imagery in this.ArtSparkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04875996639432864367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-72160602987703758472010-10-18T16:15:56.308+01:002010-10-18T16:15:56.308+01:00I like the rhythm of this and the spontaneity of i...I like the rhythm of this and the spontaneity of it. That's a hard stop at the end. Just because we hit the ground, doesn't mean we don't still feel the love though, does it?<br /><br />Where did you write it?<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-50991132047418297942010-10-18T15:49:59.818+01:002010-10-18T15:49:59.818+01:00I fell for this poem, TFE! And a stunning end to i...I fell for this poem, TFE! And a stunning end to it. Wow.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-30218723661322901692010-10-18T15:25:06.654+01:002010-10-18T15:25:06.654+01:00Love is a free fall and landing on the ground is t...Love is a free fall and landing on the ground is tough - but the things in between that were brighter and lighter because of love experienced are expressed nicely here! Excellent!MuseSwingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11999288873532715380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-66154635509057015812010-10-18T14:25:34.779+01:002010-10-18T14:25:34.779+01:00Unsure about the line "Hand in hand through t...Unsure about the line "Hand in hand through the" - it kinda sticks out. Either shove rain on the end or split it up further! Other than that, a great stream of consciousness.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-41734892918944138122010-10-18T13:01:43.139+01:002010-10-18T13:01:43.139+01:00The hitting the ground part might not be so attrac...The hitting the ground part might not be so attractive, but I'd love another go at falling love again anyway! Nice ticket, TFE.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-5411078116044908372010-10-18T12:47:14.618+01:002010-10-18T12:47:14.618+01:00I love the way you have written this Peadar, and i...I love the way you have written this Peadar, and it's very astute.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826501916623305535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-63903839247012710462010-10-18T08:20:15.908+01:002010-10-18T08:20:15.908+01:00This is cool, different and interesting...
Some qu...This is cool, different and interesting...<br />Some questions they are...Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-7680189454739522102010-10-18T08:09:18.670+01:002010-10-18T08:09:18.670+01:00Made for reciting from rooftops, this one, TFE, lo...Made for reciting from rooftops, this one, TFE, love how it tongue-rolled the whole way to ground. Ta-muchly!Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05990807765195683301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-56178827574506940292010-10-18T07:58:44.108+01:002010-10-18T07:58:44.108+01:00TFE this has gotta be my favourite piece thus far....TFE this has gotta be my favourite piece thus far.<br />I the love the tumbling cascading rhythm <br />The words themselves for me fall over themselves - stopping at saliant points<br />"Beat to the rhythm of your heart"<br />The off again... falling from grace to disgrace,to pregnacy hand in hand through the rain<br />It's mouth watering imagery<br />This has really given my week a good kick start and I woke up in such a bad mood - not anymore. Thank you :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-19202646883255325882010-10-18T04:38:13.620+01:002010-10-18T04:38:13.620+01:00The body language of the two potential lovers in t...The body language of the two potential lovers in that photo says everything. <br /><br />"beat you to the rhythm of your heart" great line there, TFE! A fascinating question and the research is still pending.Dr. Jeanne Irishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11277286531162894465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8012340126991815859.post-8941525173148434512010-10-18T02:09:21.920+01:002010-10-18T02:09:21.920+01:00Falling is such an interesting description of thin...Falling is such an interesting description of things that could be positive - are we happy, or not? Hmmm.The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.com